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I have used this piece of writing as a submission for a writing portfolio as part of my application for Bangor University (6th January 2015) -- Danielle Jade Dudley UPDATE: I got in
you wrote right-handed, but you played
the guitar left-handed. i asked you why
and your chapped lips formed a crumpled
smile, the smile that always reminded me
of a pink accordion, and you said, "i guess
my brain was just wired backwards that way."
those were the days when i was not a girl
made of smoke and charred bones,
(we pretended that i wasn't, anyway)
the days when i did not need a bottle the way
i had as a baby, now glass instead of plastic
(i hadn't yet recognised that i did, anyway)
and the words i love you spilled so naturally
over my lips like strawberry liquor.
i never told you how odd you looked
with your clothes on, did i?
you liked to play on the beach, alone,
at night time, the moon your spotlight,
the pallid sand your stage. naked, you
didn't sing in english; you said the stars
were your audience, and the only language
they understood was love. so you whooped
and wailed while your fingers tickled
the belly of the long-necked wooden animal that
you had fallen in love with long before i met you,
and the ocean roared for an encore after every
performance.
i never loved you as much as i did on the nights
i caught you crooning to the stars.
it was winter when i found you.
i knew something was wrong, because you hadn't
sung to the stars for a while, and they'd seemed to
grow larger, brighter, hungry for your voice.
the ocean was restless, slate-grey layers of misery
trampling over each other to snatch a sight of you.
your guitar lay in splinters against the rocks.
right-handed instrument, strung to play left-handed,
because your brain was wired backwards that way,
remember?
your brain was wired to be beautiful.
on the precipice of the cliff was a puddle
of faded denim and two battered shoes,
frayed laces outstretched towards the
beach like desperate white fingers.
and then, a bloody, naked smear against
a rock, a hundred, a thousand, a million
feet below.
i remember a seagull picking woefully
at your hair, sandy strands swaying
in the breeze like kelp.
the ocean howled and the sound was full of
loss.
you wrote right-handed, but you played
the guitar left-handed. i asked you why
and your chapped lips formed a crumpled
smile, the smile that always reminded me
of a pink accordion, and you said, "i guess
my brain was just wired backwards that way."
those were the days when i was not a girl
made of smoke and charred bones,
(we pretended that i wasn't, anyway)
the days when i did not need a bottle the way
i had as a baby, now glass instead of plastic
(i hadn't yet recognised that i did, anyway)
and the words i love you spilled so naturally
over my lips like strawberry liquor.
i never told you how odd you looked
with your clothes on, did i?
you liked to play on the beach, alone,
at night time, the moon your spotlight,
the pallid sand your stage. naked, you
didn't sing in english; you said the stars
were your audience, and the only language
they understood was love. so you whooped
and wailed while your fingers tickled
the belly of the long-necked wooden animal that
you had fallen in love with long before i met you,
and the ocean roared for an encore after every
performance.
i never loved you as much as i did on the nights
i caught you crooning to the stars.
it was winter when i found you.
i knew something was wrong, because you hadn't
sung to the stars for a while, and they'd seemed to
grow larger, brighter, hungry for your voice.
the ocean was restless, slate-grey layers of misery
trampling over each other to snatch a sight of you.
your guitar lay in splinters against the rocks.
right-handed instrument, strung to play left-handed,
because your brain was wired backwards that way,
remember?
your brain was wired to be beautiful.
on the precipice of the cliff was a puddle
of faded denim and two battered shoes,
frayed laces outstretched towards the
beach like desperate white fingers.
and then, a bloody, naked smear against
a rock, a hundred, a thousand, a million
feet below.
i remember a seagull picking woefully
at your hair, sandy strands swaying
in the breeze like kelp.
the ocean howled and the sound was full of
loss.
Literature
What I Now Know.
one day you will understand:
fireworks are made of
chemistry and calculations.
they will turn to smoke
faster than they bloom.
one day you will realise that magic
(like fireworks)
is mostly lies.
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never told you
i always drink too much of
this fashionable spring air
but enough isn't me.
gold, god, we climb over
every hill and fall in love
with breaded earth again and again.
i dream of you in payphone
booths when i think of home,
smiling my signal through the chords
hoping it will replace
a lover's flesh.
but sweating all these colors fresh,
oh, it's something to see,
something to me
because we run in empty fields
while you sit cramped inside,
barely pumping the blood around your toes.
come on, darling, you know.
when we drive i sing into memory;
do you remember when i fell
out of your tree? you ran and picked me
up a
Literature
Throw Away Something Important
Start by deciding what you consider to be important.
You can start small, for instance, a packet of cigarettes, door keys, or a lucky bottle cap,
For advanced discarding, you may consider a person, emotions such as empathy, or a vital organ,
This isn't recommended for beginners, however.
Once you have chosen your important item,
Throw it away in any manner you chose.
Don't just give it to a friend for safe keeping,
Get rid of it, for good.
This is the easiest part done.
Next, try and push the newly discarded item from your mind,
You can use any number of distractions to achieve this,
For example, social interaction, a visit to the
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this is one of my poems that i have to read over a few times before i like it.
there's a lot wrong with this one. the structure is all fucked up, the entire poem is too long, the persona annoys me a bit. but i like the story that she has to tell. edit: and apparently quite a few others do, too. :') <3
featured!! : news.deviantart.com/article/14…
jesus christ, i actually got a DLD. :'D news.deviantart.com/article/14… <3333
I have used this piece of writing as a submission for a writing portfolio as part of my application for Bangor University (6th January 2015) -- Danielle Jade Dudley
there's a lot wrong with this one. the structure is all fucked up, the entire poem is too long, the persona annoys me a bit. but i like the story that she has to tell. edit: and apparently quite a few others do, too. :') <3
featured!! : news.deviantart.com/article/14…
jesus christ, i actually got a DLD. :'D news.deviantart.com/article/14… <3333
I have used this piece of writing as a submission for a writing portfolio as part of my application for Bangor University (6th January 2015) -- Danielle Jade Dudley
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Congrats on the DLD, sweetheart!