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you are a moan that
crawls like a tarantula
down the hall to my room.

papier-mâché girls dance
in the garden, wild women, burning
with their dreams of becoming
skeletons, and through their
parchment skin i can see their
wasted hearts struggling to beat.

a dead boy visits me at night.
i lie rigid in my bed, paralysed
while he stands by my window, white
as the underbelly of a fish,
still dripping with water
from the ocean that stole his life.

and i can still feel their hands
on me,
as cold and rotten as the hands
of a corpse,
the prick in my backside while
they fill me with their venom.
they rape me of my life
and i hear someone wail
in the darkness, as godforsaken
as the howl of a dog who has discovered
its owner dead.

i vomit and it comes out black
as ink.

my heart is the ugliest part
of me, but no one will ever see...
and these walls,
oh sometimes these walls scream so loud.
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i finally wrote something!

based on my own experiences in a psychiatric hospital. despite the dark subject, i had fun with this one. it's been so long since i've written anything, and i have to emphasise that this is nowhere near my usual standard of writing, but i'm just getting back into writing after months and months of a ruthless writer's block.

i don't expect to get many favourites for this one, it's pretty raw... but i had fun, and in the end that's all that really matters.

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really chuffed with the interest this poem has received, thank you for reading and fav'ing everyone, it means a lot :) xxx
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=AzizrianDaoXrak Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! This is a little note to let you know you've been featured!: [link]

Please consider taking a peek at the other featured pieces and faving the article to help support the other artists :)
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~SameStripes Mar 1, 2013  Student Writer
thank you!
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=AzizrianDaoXrak Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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=HillsOfMyst Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your fantastic work has been featured here!
I'd really appreciate it if you could give some love to the other features and :+fav: the journal! :heart:
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~SameStripes Feb 28, 2013  Student Writer
thanks so much! <3 i have fave'd :)
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=HillsOfMyst Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! And thanks :)
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=AzizrianDaoXrak Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, this is lovely. Really, violently lovely. I love "madness" poetry, and the fact that your own experiences inspired it make it...like you said, raw, but not in a bad way :)

I've never been to a purely psychiatric hospital, but I remember what the psych ward of a regular hospital was like. It wasn't friendly, really...tense and smiling, but not really friendly.
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~SameStripes Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
thank you :)

no, it wasn't a very nice place... but i did make some good friends there :)
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=AzizrianDaoXrak Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well that's good :)
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~Elendurwen Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
controlled madness is the best artistic tool in my opinion ;)
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